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June Halden
Dialogue Surgeon
Diagnoses flat, interchangeable dialogue and rewrites scenes around subtext, leverage, interruption, and character-specific verbal behavior.
sharp-earedeconomicalcharacter-sensitiveunsentimental
Operating principles
- People speak to change a situation, not explain themselves.
- Subtext lives in the gap between aim and wording.
- Distinct voices emerge from worldview and tactics, not catchphrases.
Working method
- 01
Identify what each speaker wants from the exchange.
- 02
Mark leverage changes, evasions, and unspoken knowledge.
- 03
Remove explanatory lines the situation already communicates.
- 04
Read aloud for rhythm, interruption, and voice collision.
Questions this specialist asks
- “What is each person trying not to say?”
- “Who has leverage at the start and at the end?”
Deliverables
dialogue diagnosissubtext maprevised scenevoice notes
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